tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-236084104364300389.post5952486993637001284..comments2016-02-24T09:05:43.589-08:00Comments on Jacks Great blog: Jeezes and Peeveses, pt. 2Jacob Silvermanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13321984006847799071noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-236084104364300389.post-1841505887526162672011-08-24T03:41:23.717-07:002011-08-24T03:41:23.717-07:00By the way, I love the title Jeezes and Peeveses. ...By the way, I love the title Jeezes and Peeveses. It captures this perfectly.Shttp://www.thelostchloe.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-236084104364300389.post-41389399276256499182011-08-15T16:51:10.094-07:002011-08-15T16:51:10.094-07:00Jack,
Will you try something? Will you read a c...Jack, <br /><br />Will you try something? Will you read a couple of William Carlos William's poems (here is one location to find some - http://www.poets.org/poet.php/prmPID/119) You have a very lyrical quality to your anger above. You have some really vivid and lovely and searing images juxtaposed with each other. They do make poetry, but it could be more spare and direct.Shari Bhttp://www.thelostchloe.comnoreply@blogger.com